14.4.2 Evaluative comments: Luna

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Next, the evaluative comments for Luna are analyzed.

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With respect to fluency, her 2nd semester performance received only negative comments from the trainers, it was characterized as disfluent, with filled pauses, pauses, repetitions, and word finding problems. As concerns delivery, both the target audience and the trainers used negative comments, such as lack of confidence, and both groups of evaluators also referred to her nervousness.

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However, a marked improvement is mirrored in the evaluations for the segment recorded after the 4th semester. Both the trainers and the target audience perceived the performance as fluent, with only some filled pauses and false starts. As concerns delivery, the target audience gave both positive and negative evaluations, such as pleasant to listen to and focused, as opposed to shy and not confident. The trainers found her delivery to be monotonous and nervous. There was one retrospective evaluative comment from her related to presentation, and it referred to how she tried to behave calmly and naturally in spite of leaving out some data from the SL.

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Her second semester segment was criticized for not being accurate, for example for using the expression biológiai szakok (biological majors), and for not making clear whether she is talking about a university or a college. Her recording made at the end of semester four, however, was described as eloquent with some problematic collocations. She didn’t touch upon any of the issues raised by the trainers in her evaluative comments (Table 14.7).
 

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Table 14.7 Evaluative comments, Student Luna
Evaluation from
2nd Semester,
Segment 13,
Fluency and delivery
2nd Semester,
Segment 13,
Style and register
4th Semester,
Segment 9,
Fluency and delivery
4th Semester,
Segment 9,
Style and register
Target audience
not confident (3×)
weak tone
soft/not loud (3×)
nervous voice
a bit boring
singing intonation
shy (2×)
blackout
fluent
only few disfluencies
pleasant to listen to
interesting
intelligent
focused
unpleasant tone
not confident (2×)
soft/not loud enough (3×)
shy (2×)
Trainers
filled pauses
disfluent speech
word finding problems (3×)
pauses
repetitions
rising intonation (2×)
clearly nervous (because of word finding problems) (2×)
not confident
nervous
the message is unclear (is it a university or a college?)
inaccurate: biológiai szakok
fluent
false starts
filled pauses
monotonous
rising intonation (2×)
bad intonation
high pitch
nervous
shy
eloquent, with some problem word combinations:
űrtechnikai mérnökség,
tolmácsképzést tanulni
 
Retrospective comments
 
 
I tried to behave naturally after leaving out some figures and numbers
 
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